My Trip to Outer Space
It’s been a while since we had a story by Geli. Here is a story from January 19th.
My Trip to Outer Space
Hi my name is Angel, How about I tell you about my trip to Outer Space.
I just went to bed when an alien family came and lifted my bed. It was sort of bumpy at first, then I felt like I was waightless. I looked around me and was shocked. It was Outer Space! I couldn’t believe it, I could breath in Outer Sapce! Five minuts later we wher at Mars or The Red Planet and believe me, everything was Red! Then a litle alien gave me an Earth and Mars Dictionary. I couldn’t go to sleep then, so I stayed up and plaied with the other aliens. It was a fun night. I was tired when it ended so I went to sleep and when I woke up I felt as if it were a dream. But still in my hand was the dictionary.
With all original spelling and punctuation. What do y’all think?

March 30th, 2006 @ 4:32 pm
Sweet. Your kid was abducted by aliens. How cool is that!?
March 30th, 2006 @ 7:19 pm
I think she has a great imagination!!! what a great writer!